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       <h1>doylet <em class=title-note>// doy-lee</em></h1>
-      <p>Low-level programming enthusiast. Uses C/C++ often. Passion for tools, privacy & game technology. Curious and learning every day.</p>
+      <p>Low-level programming enthusiast. Uses C/C++ often. Passion for tools, privacy & game technology. Curious & learning every day.</p>
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       <h3>Hey there!</h3>
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-        G'day, I'm a software developer who enjoys low-level programming. I have an interest
-        in building bespoke software using my own libraries, developing a "tech garden" so to speak.
-        That is a bunch of foundational libraries[<a href="#about-dn-library">1</a>] where I've
-        written and/or understood every line of code in them. Any bug is a bug in <i>my</i> source
-        code that I can go understand and fix.
+        G'day, I'm a software developer who started programming professionally in 2018 and have
+        slowly come to enjoy low-level programming. I have an interest in building bespoke software
+        using my own libraries, developing a "tech garden" so to speak. That is a bunch of
+        foundational libraries[<a href="#about-dn-library">1</a>] where I've written and/or
+        understood every line of code in them. Any bug is a bug in <i>my</i> source code that I can
+        go understand and fix.
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